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Old 05-01-2008
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my first ever original attempt at shayari

jab kabhi uska chehra zehan mein aata hai
ek meetha meetha sa dard de jaata hai
kuch to hai uski qaatil nigahon mein
jo humein humse hi chura le jaata hai



PJ version of the same:

jab kabhi uska chehra zehan mein aata hai
aisa lagta hai ki woh yahi kahi hai
phir mein neend se uthta hoon
aur pata chalta hai ki meri bus nikal gayi hai

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Re: my first ever original attempt at shayari

1st one is nice...2nd one is funny... overall great work for your 1st attempt
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Re: my first ever original attempt at shayari

very nice but PJ just like u lol
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